Silent music

Okay....this was good but this.... Everyday they fight for our Rights and freedoms, is a no-no. Never seperate a whole sentence just to keep the rythym. That just makes the ...

I did like this poem. It rhymed and had good rhythym. Maybe you could of seperated the last line apart. It did sound mushy and off balance when two words ...

I enjoyed this piece! It was very thorough and beautiful. It is very.....dramatic and.... another word that I do not know :D I don't look for grammar errors or spelling ...

This was very good! I think it was an amazing peice of work. The rythym was clear and so were the words and the defenitions that you meant for them ...

Awwww! This is very cute! I like it, but it is a little to lovey dovey for me. This would be like a very silly teenage romance poem! :D I ...

WOAH! Teddy, this was very good! The user above me is correct! You are a brilliant writer and I have never thought of this before! Very good and keep writing! ...

Okay I absolutely loved this descriptive piece. I have never read your work before and now I regret that. This is amazing! :D I found the problems as the user ...

:D I really enjoy most of your lyrics because almost all of them are based on God and Satin. But this last stanza: Look at night I’m on your window ...

:shock: that....was......TOTALLY WICKED! I absolutely loved it! Now that is what I call a poem! Descripton after description! You made me feel as if I was in the narrators shoes!(which ...

That was okay. It wasn't one of my favorites. I honestly don't get the meaning of the poem. It makes no sense to me. Just very confusing. I understand it's ...

AWWW :smt053 So friggin cute! I love it Kaykay. Is it like a love poem? That's what it seemed like. I think it was great. And dude with the eyeball ...

Guys be gentle. Her first try it was. Said that she did. Okay dear, this was quite......hmmmm.......quite eye opening. It was a little weak in words, but that is no ...

:shock: I. Don't. Know. What. To. Say. That poem was.....just......amazing. The content was very nice. Same with the message that you were trying to get across to some people. Very ...

you need to tell your friend that he is an amazing writer! This is the most romantic poem that I have read in a long time! I especially love the ...

:shock: That......was..........so.......INCREDIBLY AWESOME!!!! I freakin loved it!!! It was amazing! I want to be able to write that kind of music! I want to write that good!!!Oh but because of ...